I wore red to Target
Not the best idea
I wore red to Target
And everybody near
Asked me “do you work here?”
Said “can you help me miss?”
Come on don’t you know
I can’t take much more of this
Guess I was asking for it
Cause look what I started
Had it coming to me when
I wore red to Target
Tried hiding in the bathroom
I thought that would be safer
‘Til someone said “hey miss
We’re out of toilet paper!”
If one more person bugs me
I swear I’ll flip my lid
This woman came up to me
And that’s just what she did
Guess I was asking for it
Cause look what I started
Had it coming to me when
I wore red to Target
I could have gone to another market
I could have worn blue or green
But I had to go to Target tell me what did it mean
Did it mean did it mean
Did it mean did it mean
I made up some fake discounts
I gave her wrong directions
I told her there were frying pans
In the electronics section
Then I felt so much better
And everything was fine
Until when I discovered
I was in back of her on line
Guess I was asking for it
Cause look what I started
Had it coming to me when
I wore red to Target
This is another poem that I published many moons ago but added some lyrics to make it in to a song. It also happens to be the first recorded CheeseBergens song that my 9 year old daughter sings. Let me know what you think.
Also, the music is free to listen to, but if anyone is so inclined to make a donation, all funds will be given to the Ovation Music Fund, a nonprofit dedicated to helping underserved kids pay for music school tuitions.
Thanks for the laugh! I asked some guy wearing a badge at Costco where to find the paper towels. He walked me to them and when I thanked him I noticed his badge was for a difference company. I called him out on it and he said, “It was easier to show you than explain I didn’t work here…” I still have a good chuckle over that!
Oh, that’s pretty funny! At least you noticed in the end…although I’m not sure if that made it better or worse!
Wow, you are the ultimate rocker family, Marissa. Unbelievable that she is only 9 years old! And the lyrics… too funny!!!
Thanks! Yes, good practice for her for sure!
I am totally amazed!!!
Can’t say how much I love this!!! Try khakis and red shirt one day! And you knew I would love the part with the frying pan in electronics, right? An electric frying pan!
Wow, do they make such a thing? Ha, ha! Thanks Stephanie! Glad you enjoyed. This one is right up your alley for sure!
http://www.williams-sonoma.com/m/products/1649300/?catalogId=27&sku=1649300&cm_ven=Google_PLA&cm_cat=Shopping&cm_pla=default&cm_ite=default&kwid=productads-adid%5E49385482063-device%5Em-plaid%5E82946571463-sku%5E1649300-adType%5EPLA&gclid=CMKn046-1tACFUtNfgodmekAiA
At first I thought someone had hacked your account and was spamming me…until I opened the link! Behold! It actually does exist!
Sorry I was in a rush posting and should’ve said more but then it would’ve been anti-climactic.
Oh no, loved the presentation!
Is that the little maid singing? Love it…hint of punk in it’s heyday, blended with rock. Tell her she’s brilliant for me.
Will do! Thank you Mike!
Bloody superb that was…took me back in time. Mt dear missus was a punk her era!
Had to ‘tweet’ obviously.
Will do Mike, and yes, got a notification of your tweet so you must be doing something right!
Twitter still confuses me yet it’s good for breaking news I think…hopefully the young maid will soon be breaking news.
Yes, I often post on Twitter, mostly to promote CheeseBergens stuff or my blogs, but rarely check my wall. Guess I’m not a very good Twitterer.
So the CheeseBergens are on twitter…I must follow…if I know enough to find you.
That sounds a bit threatening, you know. Well, we are already following you so…
I’ll never get my head around Twitter…the more I use it, the less I know…bit like life really.
I’m the same. Never really got Twitter. Oh well, who needs it?
Exactly my words to the young Norma Jean all those years ago…how wrong I was.
Red always seems to be some sort of target, wait a second… Omg you’re a genius!! 🍎
Am I a genius…or is it that clever marketing team at Target…?
They took the easy way out. You shook stuff up!
Nice voice. Amazing. Loved your lyrics.
Thank you! I will pass on the compliment to my daughter!
Excellent. At least you didn’t just fade into the backgroung. You stood out. And all the employees went on break
That’s what I was telling them…as they were escorting me out!
That’s a great song, but the photo is even better!
I somehow don’t think that’s a compliment.
It is – and a high one indeed. I honestly LOVE that photo.
Thank you!
I love it.
Thank you Craig!
Yeah… wearing red to target.. bad idea. Pairing it with khaki pants, even worse.
Yes, well that is one thing I never did!
I thought this was familiar! Awesome!
Thanks! Yeah, well the poems just kind of lend themselves to songs.
You know I’m digging this, Marissa! Your daughter brings the power vocals and attitude to the song!
Thank you Syl! I’m sure she will be happy for the compliment.
You’re welcome and rock on!
Wow so the talent runs in the family i see 😉 This is awesome Marissa. Your daughter is such a charmer 💗
Oh, you have no idea! Ha, ha! Thank you Zee!
Loved the song – especially when you started giving bogus information with the karmic twist at the end! I agree with VPub though – the picture is the best. The family that plays together …. 🙂
Thank you Joanne! I think this kind of insanity may capture the Christmas season well.
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! I love it. I’ve been the customer ASKING a red shirted person in target for help. 🙂 Maybe it was you. 😉
I’ve done the same but, thankfully, have never been asked!
Couldn’t play the video here on my app, so I searched for it on Youtube and saw the one Live at the Mint! Wow! Your daughter has got the voice and confidence – imagine for a nine yr old! She rocks!
Now, about the lyrics, did you know I worked at Target briefly? And yes, don’t wear red to target!!! I tell myself that every time I go out and there’s a slight chance we may stop by there (until realize it’s too late – I’m inside the store already! Aaaargh!) I love it, though! The song, I mean. Not wearing red to target my mantra. Ha!
Thank you for the kind words about my daughter! Yes, I suppose that someone who works at Target would be the most aware of never going there wearing red! You must be traumatized!
I love Target! I don’t think I would mind people asking me where anything is since I could still see the aisles in my head, anyways! Haha!
Wow, a very positive attitude for someone who worked there.
amazing – great melodic words…the tune of this lyrics brings joy and good smile…
Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed!
Love it! Wear red and they are all over you like a bull’s eye! Nice job. Wear green next time? 🙂
Or blue… and then don’t go to Walmart!
Love this one Marissa! Currently have no headphones though, so I’ll have to listen to your tiny rock princess later. Not sure if the commuters of London Town on a slient train are quite ready for her….
Well, they better be! Works better than an alarm clock…I can attest!
Love your guys is music. I just watched a couple of videos on YouTube of you guys playing shows.
You guys rock! 🙂
Thanks so much Charlie!
You welcome Marissa. 🙂
Oh my gosh! This is SO good! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!! Who is the main vocalist? Is that you or your daughter? Marissa, I really enjoyed this and you know this is really not my type of music. I had FUN listening to this! You guys so deserve to go places! Just wow! ❤
Ha, ha! That’s my daughter…although my son sings too. They take turns with the leads. I’m glad it was fun for you. That’s really just what The CheeseBergens are about.
Reminds me of the time I took a camera to the beach. People stood in line. They all wanted selfies. But I figured out what to do. I started charging.
That’s the spirit!
Okay…I absolutely love this. I fell for the lyrics and was a goner when I listened. I love the beat and your daughter’s voice. WOW!! So good you guys!
Thank you Michelle! I’ll have to pass on the kind words to my daughter! She will appreciate, I’m sure.
Truly good!
This is hilarious because it happens to me all the time. I wear a tie for work. I often stop in to stores during my workday and people often assume I’m the manager.
I couldn’t get the sound from the video on my phone ☹️
Oh man! You’ll have to play loudly once you are in front of computer. You do look oddly like a manager at Target though. Might you have missed your calling in life? Ha, ha!
Red to Target? Oh no, ha ha. Guess you couldn’t hide in the bathroom forever. This has happened to me before, I think I wore blue to Walmart. Good one!
Oh yeah, that’s just as bad!
It was the Lady in Red!!!!… a quite visible target indeed 😀 loved this one, Marissa. Sending best wishes!!!!
Ha, ha! Yes, for sure!
OMG… o…m…g…!! The song lyrics are great, the track is fun, and the photo — oh lovin’ the family photo 😀
Thank you Christy!
Have retweeted link, you must be proud mom!
Thanks so much Anna. Yes, quite!
This was super, Marissa! You were right on target with your rhymes, music and beat to the syllables.
Your daughter has a pretty voice like her other members of the family but higher than Dad or brother. 😉 She has a cool “lilt” or upbeat ending to some of the words which is really unique! Wow, the instrumental part is catchy, too!!
Thanks Robin! My daughter actually has a deep voice for a girl, but yes, nothing like dad or brother. I will pass on your kind words.
I enjoyed the style of her singing and could tell she was a girl but do agree, her voice sounds mature! 🙂 I may have her name wrong but I want to call her Angelica. Only two “l’s” in her name. . . Maybe? 🙂
Happy holidays to you and the rest of the. Cheesebergens!! hugs xo
LOL. I’ve done that, asked innocent civilians if they work there.
Ah….in your defense….they really should have known better!
LOL, Thanks.