So long ago the earth was new
When nobody yet had a clue
Of internet or cell phone calls
And just carved hash tags into walls
The turtle didn’t do so well
Because you see, he’d not a shell
So he’d get teased he knew not why
So badly that he’d sometimes cry
Perhaps they did it out of boredom
For clearly he was not their problem
So maybe they had little brains
No anti bullying campaigns
But oh the mean things they would say
Like “you look 90 if a day”
And oh the fun that they would poke
And tell him ‘you so ugly’ jokes
Like ‘you so ugly it’s a sin
You like The Donald’s ugly twin
When you born to your mom’s chagrin
The doc tried shoving you back in
The turtle walked off feeling bad
Until he saw a hermit crab
Who summoned him with a low murmur
From a dark foreboding corner
“Psst,hey turtle over here”
The turtle did proceed in fear
“You know you would look really swell
If you got you a bitchin shell
It’s like dumb luck you came my way
Because today’s your lucky day
We got each kind under the sun
Today we got em two for one
Now I don’t deal with knock off brands
I’m more a calcium carbonate man
But for you I would say win win
To maybe go with keratin
I’ll give you two for 50 bucks
Let’s say that they fell off a truck”
And so the turtle he agreed
Mostly from despairing need
The crab said “Kay man see you later-
Wait do you got rolling paper?”
Walked away with five crisp tens
And never was heard from again
The turtle was a happy bloke
Till pretty soon when both shells broke
He should have known the crab’s deceit
He never gave him a receipt
But no fear, in the next few days he
Bought a better one at Macy’s.
Or Bloomies. That crab sold me speakers from the back of a van once.
Macy’s was an easier rhyme.
Yeah, you gotta look out for those crabs. Shysters I tell you!
Well you prompted a Google quest to see which of the two is the most intelligent yet no satisfactory answer there save for one chap who wrote that hermit crabs live long and are ‘funner’ (I quote) than turtles…just thought you’d like to know…cracking read was your verse by the way.
Oh yeah, hermit crabs are tons funner than turtles!!
I don’t know, turtles certainly seem wiser but also somehow more gullible, don’t you think?
On balance I think you correct. In terms of personal hygiene I think a bath with a turtle (assuming one had to share metered water at an extortionate rate) likely preferable over the crab?
a safer bet if nothing else.
😂😂 Marissa, you are awesome! I have a tortoise and was laughing so hard reading it… and all the mean offending statements you found…. I guess my tortoise wasn’t at Macy’s for his shell… but it does the trick… lol!
Oh no, please tell him that I hope he wasn’t insulted!! Turtles are awesome if just a bit naive.
I will… if I can remember until spring… lol! You know 40+… haha! But yes, turtles are naive and stubborn in a silly way. He can climb the fence with no success…. and tries it again every day! But I have to admit that when he works on climbing his house he often makes it. Only the fence thingy doesn’t work out…. for years… lol! But what can I say? Never give up… haha!
That must be amusing to watch. I’m sure it’s because the fence is so vertical. Yep, never give up…maybe someday.
That poor turtle. I’m glad Macy’s came through for him
Yes, and they have a 30 day return policy too!
..and turtle wasn’t crabby anymore! Whew! Macy’s got his back.
I unwittingly seemed to have endorsed Macy’s here which is funny because I worked there for about a year though not directly for Macy’s but rather as a retail merchandiser. I suppose they are an okay company although some of the manager’s were a bit bothersome.
Used to go to the one here in downtown – Robinson’s May then Macy’s. Then not anymore when I moved. I like it when they have sale! Ha ha!
Yes, they can have some good sales. A bit pricey when they don’t!
No, I don’t shop their regular-priced items either! 🙂
Well now I know. At least the crab of questionable character did the turtle a favor. Everyone needs a shell between them and the cruelty of the world.
Yes, he did lead him in the right direction if nothing else.
There’s that.
This was cute and funny at the same time.
Thank you Geetha!
Welcome 🙂
Oh man, this is funny! Where do you dream up these things????? 😀
I thought it might be fun to do a spoof on a myth and everything else just kind of fell into place.
Extremely amusing! 👍
I’d demand a shell too if I was the Donald’s ugly twin. Too funny! I hope the turtle remember her/his Macy’s coupon…
Oh yes, those Macy’s coupons are very important!
Oh my. And you could pull this off. Well done. LOL
The bizarre is my wheelhouse. Thank you!
LOL
Was hard to read until Macy’s came to the rescue
I tried for a happy ending.
Next Stop….Hollywood
I’m very fond of turtles, and I’m glad he gained a new shell. I once say “George” in the Galapagos Islands and it remains a treasured memory 🙂
Yes, turtles, they are old souls.
You just told my life story. I have gypped here and I have been gypped there. I have been gypped everywhere, even been gypped out of my underwear. 🙂
It’s quite possible…shoddy workmanship!
Oh thank goodness that poor turtle found a shell at Macy’s. I laughed all the way through this, Marissa. You really are a master with words. Wow!! How you string words together …. AMAZING! ❤
Yes, it seems Macy’s is good for some things although I prefer thrift stores myself. Can’t skimp on quality with a shell though! Thanks Amy!
Tee hee ….. Marissa, you are so funny!!!!
Funny stuff, I love at the end the non-rhyming showstopper of Macy’s. Even though I have no idea what that is.
Hmmm… Never heard of Macy’s? One if the largest department stores over here but perhaps you are better off.
Macy’s and ‘days he’ was my failed attempt at a showstopper rhyme but no worries.
Funny video! Where do you find this stuff?
Oh ok, no it sounds delightful. I love large department stores, I feel like I’m going into a theme park/theatre play with big brother screens. It’s free too.
My mind seems to make corrolations with others words, to every single thing I may have ever seen in my 25 years of living, fairly randomly and quickly.
I am also an explorer Marissa, remember
Oh, for sure. I used to have the same feeling when I went into all malls really, but when I was a very small child. The nuance wore off quickly.
Poor turtle, never trust a hermit crab….but Macy’s is a great store!
It can be. I actually worked there for about a year and a half as a retail merchandiser and wouldn’t cry if I never had to step a foot in there again for as long as I live but they did have some good stuff!
How the turtle got his first shell is kind of a shady deal, fresh off the truck. I wanted to say something about the poor turtle needing a place to stay warm in.
You covered the reason why he needed to hide in shame, in a much more interesting and hilarious way, Marissa. 😀 I never trusted crabs, anyway!
So glad to know Macy’s helped the little guy out. I bet he had to “shell out” a lot of clams. . . .
Boy, and when you consider the $50 that he lost…sheesh! Poor turtle can’t catch a break!
You are so right, the turtle may have had to “wax” a few cars to cough up that $50!! 😀
For sure!
I caught myself reading this with an implied rap beat. That crab be a badass 😉
I didn’t even purposely do a rap for this one. Guess it’s just innate by now. Maybe I should do a full on rap about the bad ass crab.
YES! Who wouldn’t love a rappin’ badass crab? 😉
What a great piece
Very inspiring
It does have a bit of a moral, doesn’t it?
A quality shell is hard to come by. Great tale, Marissa!
Yes, a hot commodity!
Haha, always check for sales!
This is hilarious and brillant
Thank you!
You’re welcome
delightful Marissa!
Thank you!
Yours is the second post about turtles that I have read today…too cute.
Hi Marissa. Always love reading the interesting comments and your responses. They make me laugh also. By the time I get to the end, at times it feels like all has been said, so I’m reluctant to comment. Having said that…ha ha!… I wish to say that there were so many hilarious moments in this expression of poetic genius that I’d like to mention two of them—“carved hash tags into wall” and “calcium carbonate man.” I’m not a chemistry whiz, so I looked up ‘calcium carbonate’ and then I really got it. Ha ha! You were really on a roll with this one. By the way, just curious who Donald refers to? I think he might be in politics, if I’m right.
Oh goodness, yes, it’s Donald Trump. Have you heard of him? He’s very famous and is now running for president and losing the respect of the American people daily.
Love it that you read all the comments and look into details so carefully. I rarely have time with all the blog reading and writing I do but once in a while something really stirs my curiosity.
Thought it was referring to Donald Trump, but had to check. Oh, he’s very famous here also. The Canadian media keeps track of his every word.
This was brilliant, Marissa! Can someone find that crab and buy a shell for The Donald to crawl into! It was all really funny, but special mentions for using the word ‘bloke’ and love the hashtags in the caves! I guess the neaderthals were the original tablet users!
Ok on second thought, forget the crappy crab shell, make it a quality one from Macy’s cause we don’t want the trump or his toupe to reappear!
Oh yeah, for sure! Let’s make sure The Donald hides for as long as possible!
“And just carved hash tags into walls”!
Well, come on! They couldn’t just like be, without hash tags!!
Right? How did humanity exist without hashtags? #MarissaExplainsItAll
It’s quite interesting how you split words (would that be the correct terminology?) to get proper rhymes when normally you could not. i.e. “days he” rhymed with “Macy’s” Ingenious!
Thanks Stephanie! Yes sometimes it’s a struggle so I’ll just do something like that. Glad it works! I wasn’t sure…
Carbonate calcium AND keratin, in the same poem… your gift is astounding. 😀
I did my research. Thanks Todd!
Love the jargon and story in this one. You hit a lot of socio-notes with your always amazing sense 🙂
Quite a compliment. Thanks so much!
Poor turtle…that mean crab
Really!
So cute and funny! 🙂
Thank you!