First she thought that Prince Charming,
Would come take her away,
She fantasized about him,
Through playgrounds and schooldays.
But his looks were too perfect,
Their love a fallacy,
She sought a man more offbeat,
With personality.
She thought that Holden Caulfield,
Might better suit her mood,
They thought everyone phonies,
They’d sit around and brood.
His sublime cynicism,
She found quite refreshing,
‘Til she sought the need for someone,
Older and less depressing.
Could Rhett Butler save her from,
Her materialistic phase?
She lived a world wind romance,
Out on a written page.
Handsome and rebellious,
But it did not go well,
When he said “I don’t give a damn,”
And she said “Go to hell!”
So time came for someone fun,
They’d hang out and joke, he’d
Treat her like the queen she was,
Good old Don Quixote.
For a while all went well,
Light hearted and farcical,
Til that fatal end brought thoughts,
Deep and philosophical.
So she looked up from her book,
And stared into the mirror,
And saw that an old woman,
Before her did appear.
Spoiled for all men by her,
Literary addiction,
For no one ever told her,
She was just reading fiction.
My earliest Fictiophilia originated with TV shows. Morticia played by Carolyn Jones, and the Catwoman played by Julie Newmar. Yep.. I love Fictiophilia. ๐
Oh yeah, they’re hot! Hope you don’t fantasize that you are involved in meaningful relationships with them though! (Don’t tell me if you do! Ha,ha)
I liked this one. I like them all. But this one stood out for me. Why? I don’t know. lol They’re all good. ๐
What’s funny is that the ending actually reminded me of your poetry style. Maybe that’s why. Lol
I think Laura just offered an insightful answer. Anyway. I’ll take all the compliments I can get, no reason necessary, thanks Tom!
And I’m still getting such satisfaction knowing I introduced the both of you. ๐
Your skills are impressive. I see you as a sort of Yenta from Fiddler on the Roof. Have you ever considered a job in the match making field of poetry?
you just reminded me of Miss O’Hara from gone with the winds… loved this
Glad to evoke that image! Thanks!
you should…you write beautifully… ๐
I loved this one! The progression of the men was just perfect!
Kind of a fluke how it turned out that the men eventually got older and more suited to women of that age. Thanks for picking up on that.
Truth!
Thanks Renita!
Shame I’m older yet more depressing – could have been in with a chance there. Never mind – a cracking verse young Marissa.
Yes, the Holden Caulfield who never really progressed. Oh well Mike, you do have your charms!
Do I? Crikey there was me thinking I’d left them in a charity shop – of course when I returned they said an aging juvenile had made off with them!
Never hurts to compare men she’s willing to share her life with.
Right! I guess in this case she never really got to the sharing her life part. I guess it’s just about women who are hung up on finding the perfect someone based on books and movies, and then they never end up with anyone.
Yeah, you’re right. However,the problem originates with men actually. ๐
Most of us (not me) is afraid of women intelligent enough to converse with on equal footing. I hate to say this but some men want their women totally submissive, close to a slave really. I don’t subscribe to that.
I LOVE books as well, Marissa. Great poem, another one I really enjoyed. Thank you! Love, Amy
Great to hear. I love books as well, obviously. I notice my reading of them has decreased since I’ve been blogging…time spent writing and reading other’s blogs. Oh well, no the worst trade off, I suppose!
Truth? I am having a harder and harder time finding quality books to read due to the quality here on WP. That is NO lie. I am shocked at the junk that is on the shelves at the library. Yes, even some of that junk I used to read but now? No. Yes I read a lot here on WP but, the quality is unmatched. And that includes YOU. Love, Amy
How well done this verse is and again such a departure from your normal stomping grounds. I very much enjoyed your literary bent in this one!
Yes, well it did take a bit of research! Thanks Torrie!
Only one thing to say, “Tomorrow is another day, y’all.”
I don’t get it. You think there’s still hope for her?
Why did she have to go and ruin it by looking in that mirror?
Marissa, you slay me with your word skilz. You are truly a master at word smithing.
Yep, well reality check, right? Sometimes it’s necessary. Thank you for your high compliments Colleen!
๐ You’re welcome, and deserving!
I used to think Rhett Butler was my dream man. In reality, he’d see right through my bullshit!
Isn’t that the point? Didn’t he see through Scarlett O’ Hara ‘a bullshit?
Wow, I see more and more familiar faces in your comment section every day! OKAY – – CAN I TELL YOU HOW MUCH I ADORED THIS POEM? Apparently, I cannot without shouting. Sorry. But it was massively witty. Really ranks up there for me. When oh when are you gonna publish? At least do this. http://blog2print.sharedbook.com/blogworld/printmyblog/index.html
I’m actually working on my first submission right now. Thank you for your vote of confidence. I did go to that site, by the way. Looks interesting. I will have to do some more poking around.
The poem was great, but you get extra bonus points for pulling off a rhyme for Don Quioxte! ๐
Oh yes, thank you. That was definitely the part that hung me up the most!
You aced it! ๐
I can always count on you to find random rhythm. You deserve an award!
https://mspahr.wordpress.com/2014/11/13/very-inspiring-blogger-award/
Seriously, you do.
Thanks so much. That means a lot!
I could totally relate to this! I used to base my “taste” of men from books I’ve read.. it did help on checking off the list of qualities to look for! But of course, it takes time and change to know someone well.
Although whenever I find “Holden” in men, I find it really attractive … but then… haha!
Yes, I think a lot of women tend to idealize men in movies and books and look for those characteristics when they are in a relationship. They are often disappointed.
Haha! Is that sad or what?!
Brilliant! Love all the literary references!
Thanks Phil!
after reviewing your work , your about me Picture and your previous comments on my work I have decided to very tongue in cheek write a poem called Bass Player – I hope you enjoy
Can’t wait…
http://thewolfhowlsatnight.wordpress.com/2014/11/13/bass-player/
It’s better than online dating.
Very true!
I ALWAYS fall in love with the leading man. NOW you tell me that it’s a bad idea.
That could explain so many things …. ๐
Love, love, love your writing.
If only we had known each other sooner! Thank you for the compliments!
my first but not last visit to your website
nice story and a real great picture
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Marissa – no words – just a golden and shinning presence!
Thank you!
Holden C. ha ha. Great ending, M. =)
Thank you!
I love this, and life never measures up to great fiction, and that is actually a good thing.
Thanks April! Yes, I suppose it is. If life was as good as fiction, where would we escape to?
Rhett Butler – where was he when we needed some fire … ๐
I guess he just didn’t give a damn!
We have to ask Margaret, then … ๐