I write this from my bedroom,
Safe under lock and key,
Sitting just feet away from,
My son’s birthday party.
And if there’s any doubt as to,
What trouble may await,
Allow me to take this moment,
As I elaborate.
For things are truly sinister,
Beneath all of this joy,
I could get smothered by the scent,
Of prepubescent boy.
Or maybe all is going well,
Until I hear a cry,
Cause it’s all fun and games until,
Someone loses an eye.
Or maybe one precocious boy,
Starts giving me some lip,
And while I am cutting the cake,
The knife suddenly slips.
And maybe his mother’s a bit
Too anal retentive,
As she gets upset over the fact,
I wasn’t more attentive.
Or perhaps it is this woman,
Deserving of abuse,
As she cheaped out on a gift card,
My son couldn’t even use.
Somehow I made it through the night,
And emerged in good graces,
By throwing cupcakes in their mouths,
And pizza in their faces.
But I did not a barter my soul,
No deals with the devil,
And though my son showed gratitude,
I deserved a medal!
Or maybe one of those dumb shirts,
For a night so gnarly,
Printed with the words “I survived…
My son’s 12th birthday party.”
Love the word ‘gnarly’ – haven’t heard that for years! However young Marissa you have left them alone while you sit in safe solitude. Insane – they will trash your house you know that!
Yes, not even sure if gnarly was in the ‘English’ meaning ‘British’ language. For some reason, I just can’t hear a Brit saying ‘Gnarly dude!’
You know, I just think, even if the trash the house, I would rather just deal with the mess after than deal with them in the present!
‘Gnarly waves’ we get them here when things get a tad choppy!
Ahhh, the prepubescent birthday party for boys. Was it followed by a sleepover? For your sake, I hope not!
Oh goodness gracious no! No matter how many sleepovers my kids are invited to, and no matter how obligated I feel, I don’t think I will ever reciprocate.
Marissa – clicked the ‘like’ three times now and still it does not show. Sorry about that!
That’s weird but no problem- I appreciate the comments!
I think it has now taken the ‘like’?
Title reminded me of two great Animals songs: “I got to get out of this face” and “It’s my face and I’ll wear it if I want to”.
Never heard the second one. Of course it’s actually a spoof on the Leslie Gore song “It’s my Party and I’ll Cry If I Want To.”
Well, you know what Leslie sang after that? “It’s Judy’s turn to cry”?
such parties, such nightmares… no? loved the way you put it down in so playful words… cheers!
Oh yes, nightmares indeed! Thanks!
Haha! You survived!
Yep! Now where’s my t-shirt?
Hahaha!
Can’t blame you for feeling that way. 🙂
I will take your sympathies. Maybe the parents wouldn’t feel the same…
It’s your house, isn’t it? 🙂
LOVE this, Marissa!!! Good job! Love, Amy
Thanks Amy!
Your poem is an awesome read! It brought back memories to this old guy but made me feel a lot older than I am……………………. (wink)
Well sorry, didn’t mean to make you feel old… But I’m glad you liked the poem, thanks!
There are some parenting moments that are medal or prize worthy.
Or maybe just t-shirt or poem worthy…
12! Could there be a bar mitzvah in someone’s future. If so, you ain’t seen nothing yet! This was great and I admire your meter and pace. 😉
Thanks Stephanie. The whole bar mitzvah thing has been a conversation in out house. I think the plan at the moment is to just send all or our out of state relatives invitations so that they can decline and send money.
Well done on surviving! And I do wonder if we ever forget that prepubescent boy scent……which, of course, is quickly replaced by the pubescent boy scent which I know all of us would like to forget! A party of boys this age is not only something to survive but also entitles you to medal of honour along with that t-shirt!
Yes, I’m still spraying air freshener.
At least the house was not destroyed. Congrats on your son’s birthday 🙂
Yes, everything still appears to be in one piece…good news on the front! Thanks Peter!
Bwaahaahaa! This was awesome and SO TRUE! I loved “the scent of prepubescent boy” which you have to have lived through to understand! LOL!
Yep, that scent of prepubescent boy…gotta love it, huh?
If only they could bottle it…Wait, no one would pay money for that! LOL!
This is too funny…and way too true. Well done, my friend.
Thanks Kurt!
Brilliant! There are few things that can match the terror and carnage of a children’s birthday party. There are also very few poets who can illustrate them so perfectly.
Thanks so much Phil! Glad you liked it!
Congrats for surviving!! You do deserve a medal. Was it a slumber party? I keep thinking about how I was always begging my parents to let me have a slumber party when I was young and they never did, except once, and how we stayed up all night (and the shenanigans that went on at other friends’ slumber parties) and now I dread the day either of my girls asks me for that 😛
Oh yes, no slumber parties for me. I went to quite a few in my day and, even though I had many playdates, I don’t think my mother ever reciprocated to that extent. She is my idol.