(A Poem For My Husband On His Birthday)
If I were to make a movie of my life,
For lack of anything better to do,
I’d probably cast me as me,
And I’d cast you as you.
And it just might be our luck,
To make it to the silver screen,
Where everyone would walk out except a brave few,
Who would hang out for the nude scenes.
They’d say the character development was thin,
They’d say the plot line was bleak,
They say the ending was unsatisfying,
They’d say the dialogue was weak.
And if a critic were to give it one to five stars,
It probably wouldn’t even rate,
But me and you would watch it every night,
And think that it was great.
The sweetest! 🙂
Thanks Liz!
beautifully versed…<3
Thanks, much appreciated!
I wouldn’t walk out on that film. I’m sure that the soundtrack would rock!
Of course, I’m thinking Highway to hell as the theme song.
I like it! 🙂
A cocktail of love with a pinch of ribald fun – perfection young Marissa.
Thanks. Hope my husband feels the same!
I feel sure he will.
Best. Wife. Ever. Love you baby! And for thise who don’t know, Marissa’s birthday was yesterday!
Thanks. I’m glad you like it…I think…
And how many people listen to the critics anyway? I sure wouldn’t be married to my guy if I’d listened to everyone else! Happy b-day to your hubby! What a wonderful gift you crafted for him!
So true. I mean, everyone has their input whenever you start a relationship I suppose…and really for a long time afterward apparently! But we’re happy and that’s what counts. Thank you so much!
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SALLLLUUUUTTTTEEEE!!!!!
Happy Birthday to the husband of Marissa! 🙂 Take him on a date !!!!! ANd I would not walk out on your movie. And I would tap my foot to the music. But I would NOT watch the nude scenes. Sorry. I am a bit of a prude! Hahahahahaha. No, really.
Many thanks from the husband of Marissa. We actually went to Cheesecake Factory but I have to admit, we had two little monkeys in tow. Does that count as a date? As for the nude scenes, definitely not to be taken too literally. You can see the PG version.
Dates with monkeys can be quite entertaining. It’s better than when the monkeys get older and can’t find time to be with you on your dates. !!! Sorry about that spoiler alert!
And I did not take the nude scenes too literally….or I would be trying to type with my hands over my eyes yelling NANANANANANANANANANANANA so I didn’t see or hear !!!! 😀
Being a hard to please film critic, I would give this one a five star thumbs up rating. And would gladly see it quite a few times, I’m sure.
Thanks Don. VIP seats for you every time!
super
Thanks!
How nice to have a poem written for you on your birthday, and especially one as good as this. He is a lucky fella indeed 🙂
Thank you. And best of all, no money spent. (Ha, I did actually have to buy him a present as well).
I have goosebumps and I was saying “ohhhhh” out loud the entire way. How awesome you wrote a poem for your hubby. What a lucky man!!!! (((HUGS))) Amy
Thanks Amy! I think so too!
That was some kinda great, girl! I would never walk out on that movie. 🙂
Guess you’re one of the brave few! Thanks Marie!
You never disappoint. Lucky man your husband.
Thanks April!